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May 15, 2010
Haiku - Hamseen
by: Anonymous

I enjoyed all of these haiku. I particularly admire "Hamseen," the image of the breathing desert, and the delicate way the poem's perspective changes to a human scale in the final line, ending with the dust that powders a car.

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