I like how you use the senses using nature, sight, tastie, and sound. When you refer to ocean, it makes you hear it. And, I like the feeling of touch which makes it passionate... erotic. I would love to be able to tie words using all the senses . Makeing it feel real . Causing such a reaction within the readers total being.
Oct 20, 2015
Kewl NEW by: Mayela
it just goes very well with both forms of using salty!!! Great job 😄