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Apr 19, 2013
 Unsolicited Ideas! NEW
by: Michael

Hi! I dig your poem and I love Ireland (half Irish). I couldn't resist playing with this one, and I hope you're not offended. I think this loosely keeps your meaning and adds another or two.

the crashing waves
call me, promise me
soothing confusion

For the pure heck of it, here's my email:

nifrus00@yahoo.com

Take care and God bless,
Michael


Sep 10, 2012
 Wandering? NEW
by: Anonymous

Not all those who wander are lost. [Tolkein]

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