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Dec 01, 2011
by: Margaret

I think this is hilarious! I love it; had me laughing.

Apr 28, 2010
Scary animals
by: Anonymous

Yes, I have lost many battles with this beast...

I like the humor in the haiku. Very clever how your title sets up a certain expectation in terms of tone, then the first two lines thwart that expectation to lead the reader in the opposite direction, and, finally, the third changes the direction again. I was definitely surprised by the ending.

- N.

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