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Jun 16, 2012
HOPE NEW
by: mervyn

From an old romantic to a young romantic thank you. Keep writing what is in your heart you are my hope for the future.

Jan 25, 2012
Question? NEW
by: Carmen

Is it clear to the reader that "my heart" is a loved one?

Jan 25, 2012
So short, so sweet :) NEW
by: Allan

So well put, in so few words!! That really tells a story...........Write more poetry please!!

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