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Apr 28, 2010
 I like Queen of the Underworld
by: Anonymous

Very interesting idea to write a longer poem using the haiku syllabic structure for each stanza.
Apr 28, 2010
 Haunting haiku
by: Anonymous

"Mystery of Light" is beautiful and haunting. I like the off-rhyme of "off" and "light." "Song of Spring" also contains a mystery or riddle.

Both poems resonated in my mind after I read them. I particularly like the sound of "Mystery of Light" when I read it out loud.

Thanks for sharing these wonderful poems... and congratulations on your very creative author bio.

- N.

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