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Sep 21, 2017
ANONYMOUSPIGZ COMMENT 160121 NEW
by: AnonymousPigz

its good

plz reply

Dec 31, 2015
Brillant NEW
by: Xiao

I like how you use the senses using nature, sight, tastie, and sound. When you refer to ocean, it makes you hear it. And, I like the feeling of touch which makes it passionate... erotic. I would love to be able to tie words using all the senses . Makeing it feel real . Causing such a reaction within the readers total being.

Oct 20, 2015
Kewl NEW
by: Mayela

it just goes very well with both forms of using salty!!! Great job 😄

Dec 24, 2013
Nice NEW
by: Anonymous

Love it!

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