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May 06, 2010
Spring haiku
by: Anonymous

These are beautiful haiku. I especially like "Spring." The sight of the first crocus was always my favorite sign of spring.

Spring always feels like a new beginning, but your poem gives this idea a twist I have never seen before by seemingly taking on the point of view of the crocus, entering the world for the first time. Wonderful!

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