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Jun 10, 2012
takes me back NEW
by: mervyn

brilliant capture of the moment I am now 63 but your haiku took me right back to those long summer vacations when study should have been done but the sun was so tempting. I must try it again next warm day. Thank you for reawakening those long lost moments.

Oct 05, 2011
by: Summer

Thats really good,
your circumstances are pretty much the same as mine.
I love to write fictiona and realistic fiction, but I can never find the time because I have such a busy life!

The only difference is that I am in 6th grade!!

Well done on your poem, it's great!

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