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Dec 18, 2016
 Try again. NEW
by: Anonymous

Very descriptive, but too much so. All three of your lines have 7 syllables, it's 5 - 7 - 5, not three lines of whatever you think sounds good...
Jan 17, 2014
 Love it... NEW
by: Anonymous

Write On... Right On!!!

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