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Feb 03, 2015
Thank you! NEW
by: Anonymous

This was written for my wife...

Jan 17, 2015
Great NEW
by: Anonymous

I love this poem Best Haiku ever

Jan 10, 2013
Please read it again...because you are incorrect. NEW
by: Anonymous

The pattern is 5-7-5. Read my haiku. It is 5, 7, and 5 syllables. Not sure where you are getting the extra syllable.

Thanks for taking the time to read my stuff, however.


Jan 08, 2013
correction NEW
by: Anonymous

your haiku is wrong because it have 18 syllables you should have 17 syllables......try to read it slowly and by syllables and youll see....

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